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Took me three days to complete. I used a reference for the positioning from the front cover of a Kerange mag one of my mums friends are giving me. But everything else is mine. Firstly, the front cover picture she didn't wear a scarf and had her hand in her hair. And the woman didn't even look like my picture, so...

Yeah, she was fun to do.

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First concerning the material.
The viewer may consider the lines as
-intentional
-unintentional

Either you had the choice of paper without lines, or you did'nt.
I'm guessing you did'nt.
Lines can be good if you are practicing, but this is posted as a work not under progress.

I advise to put a new paper over this and transfer it.
The adjustments you might consider are

- tilting the forehead
- lowering the hairline
- be especially careful with black lines around the mouth
- reduce the blackness between the lips and outline teeth
- bringing the eyes to the same height and direct the gaze
- giving the nose just one or two more lines, to tell the shape

Very nice work with the hair, I would love to see the photoreference you mention
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May 27, 2009, 4:15:31 PM

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