Took me three days to complete. I used a reference for the positioning from the front cover of a Kerange mag one of my mums friends are giving me. But everything else is mine. Firstly, the front cover picture she didn't wear a scarf and had her hand in her hair. And the woman didn't even look like my picture, so...
First concerning the material. The viewer may consider the lines as -intentional -unintentional
Either you had the choice of paper without lines, or you did'nt. I'm guessing you did'nt. Lines can be good if you are practicing, but this is posted as a work not under progress.
I advise to put a new paper over this and transfer it. The adjustments you might consider are
- tilting the forehead - lowering the hairline - be especially careful with black lines around the mouth - reduce the blackness between the lips and outline teeth - bringing the eyes to the same height and direct the gaze - giving the nose just one or two more lines, to tell the shape
Very nice work with the hair, I would love to see the photoreference you mention
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The viewer may consider the lines as
-intentional
-unintentional
Either you had the choice of paper without lines, or you did'nt.
I'm guessing you did'nt.
Lines can be good if you are practicing, but this is posted as a work not under progress.
I advise to put a new paper over this and transfer it.
The adjustments you might consider are
- tilting the forehead
- lowering the hairline
- be especially careful with black lines around the mouth
- reduce the blackness between the lips and outline teeth
- bringing the eyes to the same height and direct the gaze
- giving the nose just one or two more lines, to tell the shape
Very nice work with the hair, I would love to see the photoreference you mention
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